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The World As We Know It

As we look at the world
What do we see?
As compared
To what used to be
This world once was
So nice and grand
Now it's just
A place to stand
And build your life
Up from the ground
Won't you stop
And look around
The world that was
Isn't here
The end is come
So near, so near
And now we sit
And wait demise
As we stare up
At once blue skies
If we look
At what we've done
Can we fix
What we've begun?
I wrote this is Geometry, as like so many others. The world as we know it is dying, and man is the cause, we evolved, like any other animal, only we took about our problems differently, with a different thinking to solving problems, and that is what put us here today.

But we have gone to far. What now, we are killing wildlife, which, as we seem to not realize, we cannot live without. Once wildlife is gone, the balance is gone. Everything will crumble.

Now I do not believe this will happen in our lifetime, however, it will happen, and maybe if we weren't so obsessed with the benefits of how we lived, and sacrificed some of the things we "need" the world will balance out.

Just maybe.
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xoDark-Angelxo13 Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2011
Whats gona happen when you don't have geometry anymore? When are you going to write????
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EmilyTheSpazz Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2011
Idk, probably in english or at home
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xoDark-Angelxo13 Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2011
Ahh I see
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EmilyTheSpazz Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2011
Yes, you do
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xxsatinangelxx Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2011
I am inspired by this :D, it's soo true its almost cryable :(. great wrk
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EmilyTheSpazz Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2011
Thanks, It took kind of a while longer than my other pieces, because the words didn't flow as well, but I'm glad you liked it <3
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xxsatinangelxx Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2011
yeh I understand tht, its horrible whn u feel the work ust isn't going right
its a great poem tho and I loved it :D x
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EmilyTheSpazz Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2011
Thanks, it took a lot, because I wasn't oriionally going for a world type theme, nor rhyming(as you can see from my gallery)but thank you so much
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xxsatinangelxx Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2011
lol it's gd and if it wasn't intended to be like tht, Im glad it turned out tht way, it's really amazing :D and ur most welcome :) x
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EternalRaine Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2011
So very true. It's unfortunate, but if mankind doesn't stop and listen. We will be our own demise.
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